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Seat 10: mawaf (3605)
Seat 1: slasher1999 (5271)
Seat 2: TheOBGYN (3200)
Seat 3: HERO (4725)
Seat 4: nikos10002 (1278)
Seat 5: BrthrFrTrb (4750)
Seat 6: …MUMMY… (2944)
Seat 8: weakwire1 (5716)
Seat 9: zhirkov84 (3865)
mawaf posts small blind (40)
slasher1999 posts big blind (80)
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Dealing pocket cards
Dealing to HERO: [Qd, Kd]
TheOBGYN calls 80
HERO calls 80
nikos10002 folds
BrthrFrTrb folds
…MUMMY… calls 80
weakwire1 calls 80
zhirkov84 calls 80
mawaf folds
slasher1999 checks
— Dealing flop [Kc, 7c, Qs]
slasher1999 checks
TheOBGYN bets 280
HERO raises 720 to 720
…MUMMY… folds
weakwire1 raises 5636 to 5636 [all in]
zhirkov84 folds
slasher1999 folds
TheOBGYN folds
HERO calls 3925 [all in]
— Dealing flop [Kc, 7c, Qs]
— Dealing turn [8h]
— Dealing river [4c]

Summary:

Main pot: 10090 won by weakwire1 (10090)
Seat 3: HERO (0), net: -4725, [Qd, Kd] (TWO_PAIR KING, QUEEN)
Seat 8: weakwire1 (11081), net: +5365, [Jc, Tc] (FLUSH KING)

Seat 3: -Rex Cramer- (5335)
Seat 4: HERO (3120)
Seat 5: eumel53 (1990)
Seat 6: Slaven11 (3065)
Seat 7: inge101 (2050)
Seat 8: 542425 (1165)
Seat 9: somebody_CH (2245)
Seat 10: Wesertaucher (2765)
Seat 1: fc coco (5730)
Seat 2: XJohnPornoX (1995)
-Rex Cramer- posts small blind (15)
HERO posts big blind (30)
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Dealing pocket cards
Dealing to HERO: [Qs, Qh]
eumel53 folds
Slaven11 folds
inge101 folds
542425 calls 30
somebody_CH calls 30
Wesertaucher raises 150 to 150
fc coco folds
XJohnPornoX folds
-Rex Cramer- folds
HERO raises 390 to 420
542425 folds
somebody_CH folds
Wesertaucher calls 270
— Dealing flop [7d, Jd, Tc]
HERO bets 645
Wesertaucher calls 645
— Dealing turn [2c]
HERO bets 2055 [all in]
Wesertaucher calls 1700 [all in]
— Dealing turn [2c]
— Dealing river [Kh]
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Summary:
Main pot: 5605 won by Wesertaucher (5605)
Seat 4: HERO (355), net: -2765, [Qs, Qh] (PAIR QUEEN)
Seat 10: Wesertaucher (5605), net: +2840, [Ks, Jc] (TWO_PAIR KING, JACK)